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The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates
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production
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the production
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 of renewable
energy
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 through five sources in four
years
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 between 2009-2012.
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, its
production
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 inclined in these
years
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 where
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the Hydraulic
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energy
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 source produced
maximum
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the maximum
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 amount of
energy
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 consistently,
while
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 solar
energy
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 and geothermal produced the least amount of renewable
energy
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 throughout all four
years
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.
To begin
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 with,
hydraulic
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hydraulics
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 produced over 3000
trillion
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 watt
energyand
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energy and
 increased along as the
years
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 passed reaching the peak level of
energy
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production
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 of 3663.4
trillion
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 watt.
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, wind and biomass showed
the
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a
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 similar inclination reaching a level of 534
trillion
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 and 326.2
trillion
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 respectively in 2012 In
contract
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contrast
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, geothermal and solar
energy
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 sources produced the least amount of
energy
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, where
geo thermal
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geothermal
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 consistently remained plataue
while
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 solar
production
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 rose to second
last
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 in
energy
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production
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 with 104.5
trillion
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watt
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watts
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 leaving geothermal at
last
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 at only 70.4
trillion
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 in 2012.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, energy, years, trillion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable sources
  • Electricity production
  • Significant growth/decline
  • Yearly basis
  • Specific figures
  • Stagnated
  • Regional differences
  • Anomalies
  • Unexpected trends
  • Implications
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