The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table below gives details of world electricity production by renewable sources in the four years between 2009 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given table illustrates
production
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the production
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of renewable
energy
through five sources in four
years
between 2009-2012.
Overall
, its
production
inclined in these
years
where
Hydraulic
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the Hydraulic
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energy
source produced
maximum
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the maximum
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amount of
energy
consistently,
while
solar
energy
and geothermal produced the least amount of renewable
energy
throughout all four
years
.
To begin
with,
hydraulic
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hydraulics
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produced over 3000
trillion
watt
energyand
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energy and
increased along as the
years
passed reaching the peak level of
energy
production
of 3663.4
trillion
watt.
Similarly
, wind and biomass showed
the
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a
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similar inclination reaching a level of 534
trillion
and 326.2
trillion
respectively in 2012 In
contract
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contrast
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, geothermal and solar
energy
sources produced the least amount of
energy
, where
geo thermal
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geothermal
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consistently remained plataue
while
solar
production
rose to second
last
in
energy
production
with 104.5
trillion
watt
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watts
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leaving geothermal at
last
at only 70.4
trillion
in 2012.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words production, energy, years, trillion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable sources
  • Electricity production
  • Significant growth/decline
  • Yearly basis
  • Specific figures
  • Stagnated
  • Regional differences
  • Anomalies
  • Unexpected trends
  • Implications
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