The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given figure illustrates the
production
of biofuel which is the making process of Use synonyms
ethanol
. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is a cycle process from the Linking Words
production
of energy to the Use synonyms
production
of carbon dioxide.
At the beginning of the whole procession, the growth of plants and trees provides energy from sunlight and carbon dioxide. It will enter the harvesting procession when the plants and trees have grown in the mutual stage. Use synonyms
Next,
it enters the machine level to arrange the result of harvesting. In Linking Words
this
stage, cellulose is taken from the harvesting. Linking Words
Also
, it will take out the sugars in the processing. Linking Words
Finally
, microbes added Linking Words
is
from sugars and they become Correct subject-verb agreement
are
ethanol
.
After making the Use synonyms
ethanol
, it provides different transportation, Use synonyms
such
as cars or Linking Words
aeroplane
. The Fix the agreement mistake
aeroplanes
production
of Use synonyms
ethanol
increases transportation and economic development. After the transportation, it put out the carbon dioxide into the air and the rain. It adds the plants and trees again. Use synonyms
Finally
, it is a circular procession of the Linking Words
production
of Use synonyms
ethanol
, which is called biofuel.Use synonyms
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