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As a part of their education, many students work at a company for a short period of time without a salary. Are there more advantages than disadvantages to this?

#part #education #students #work #company #period #time #salary
Some
students
 of
university
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the university
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goes
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 to
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the company
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company
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companies
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 for
part-time
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a part-time
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job
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jobs
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 without salary,
this
 is
also
 supported by the education system and
universitites
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universities
.
This
 essay will discuss both
benefits
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the benefits
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 and the drawbacks of
this
 concept. One of the primary
advantage
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advantages
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 of
work
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working
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 at a company is
an
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the
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 experience, it
consider
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is considered
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as
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apply
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a strong base
of
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for
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 the career,
it
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and it
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 improves
student's
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a student's
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 capability, character and quality of
work
.
moreover
, it
also
 helps to get
high-paid
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high-paying
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job
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jobs
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 and designated
post
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posts
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 in the industries.
Additionally
, it enhances more information regarding
work
 and firm.
For instance
, my cousin got
high-paid
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the high-paid
a high-paid
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job
 after
the
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apply
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completion
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completing
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 of degree, the reason is, that he mentioned his part-time
work
 experience in his resume, which
benifits
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benefits
 a lot as a fresher employee.
However
,
job
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a job
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 without
salary
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a salary
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also
 has its drawbacks. One significant disadvantage is the lack of concentration in study, which can
results
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result
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as
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in
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 low grades in
final
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the final
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examina
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examine
.
Moreover
, it at all
students
 can balance their education and
work
, it
do
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does
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note creat
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not create
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 any
productiveness
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productivity
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 at all.
For instance
, many
of
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apply
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student
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students
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could
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were
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 not able to clear
the
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apply
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last
year
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year's
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 examination,
that mean
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which
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,
students
 cannot participate
for
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in
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 placements at university and have to apply for re-examination,
To conclude
,
while
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apply
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a
job
 without money can develop
students
 fundamentally and
build-up
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build up
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 confidence and dedication to
do
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doing
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work
 in future. Meanwhile, it
also
 affects the merits of
student
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students
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 which is
also
 very important for
further
work
. It is essential to address these issues to ensure that the benefits of
internship
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internships
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 can be fully realized by all
students
.
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grammar
Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms. For example, 'Some students of university goes' should be 'Some university students go'.
coherence
Work on varying sentence length and complexity to make your writing more engaging and less repetitive.
coherence
Connect ideas more smoothly between sentences and paragraphs. Use more transitional phrases like 'Furthermore' and 'In addition'.
task
Provide more specific examples to support your points. This can make your argument more persuasive.
grammar
Review punctuation use, especially with commas and periods, to avoid run-on sentences and ensure clarity.
task
Expand on your conclusion to reiterate your main points more clearly and strongly. This will leave a lasting impression on the reader.
task
The essay addresses both advantages and disadvantages effectively.
coherence
You have provided a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
task
Real-life examples are used to support your arguments, adding credibility to your points.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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