The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrecan cities through the year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the average temperatures of three Afrecan cities through the year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicts the weather conditions during a
year
broken down by month within three African towns
such
as
Mombasa
, Kenya;
Cairo
, Egypt and Cape Town, South Africa.
Firstly
, it is noticeable that the three
cities
showed some fluctuation during these 12 months.
Cairo
in Egypt was the one that had the highest and lowest temperature.
Moreover
,
Mombasa
remained above 75
Fahrenheit
degree
while
Cape Town kept its weather below 70
Fahrenheit
degree.
Cairo
started the
year
with the lowest climate at 55
Fahrenheit
degree, after seven months reached a peak at 82
degrees
, and
then
significantly dropped
at the end
of the
year
with a temperature of 57
degrees
.
Conversely
, Cape Town and
Mombasa
, both
cities
began January with 70 and 80
Fahrenheit
degrees
, respectively,
then
at the middle of the
year
, a downward trend was seen where
Cairo
fell to 55
degrees
whilst
Mombasa
had a decrease of 75
degrees
.
At the end
of December, both
cities
had an increase where they reached the same temperature as January.
To sum up
, these three African
cities
located in Egypt, Kenya, and South Africa showed slight fluctuation during the
year
given.
However
,
Cairo
had the highest and lowest weather
while
the other two towns demonstrated more stable climate conditions.
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