The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the
percentage
of elderly people in Japan, Sweden, and the USA
from 1940 to 2020, with projections until 2040.
Overall
, the proportion
of the three different countries
has increased since 1940 and is expected to continue rising until 2040. Moreover
, while
the percentage
of the population aged 65 and over in the USA
was the highest at the start, it is estimated that this
figure will be overtaken by Japan by the end of the period.
In terms of countries
with a high proportion
at the start, the proportion
of the USA
stood at just below 10% in 1940. The figure then
rose moderately to precisely 15% in 1980 before remaining relatively steady until 2020. Thereafter
, it is projected to experience a significant growth of around 8% to finish at 23%. Likewise
, the proportion
in Sweden was approximately 7% in 1940. From this
point onwards, it witnessed a significant climb, thus
surpassing that of the USA
at about 18% in 2020. In the following 20 years, it is predicted that it will rise moderately, ending slightly above that of the USA
at 25% in the final year.
Regarding the country with the lowest old-age population at the beginning, the percentage
in Japan started at almost half that of the USA
at 5% in 1940. In contrast
to other countries
, the percentage
fell to around 3% in 1960 and remained steady until 1980. However
, the proportion
rose moderately to exactly 10% in 2020 before it is expected to skyrocket and overtake those of the other two countries
at about 27% in 2040.Submitted by alfinkarimah008 on
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