The diagrams below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the transformation of Grange
Park
when it was first established in 1920 and its layout in the present time.
To begin
with, the park
in 1920 had an entrance on the top and bottom middle area near Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street. Then
, it had a fountain located in the centre of the park
along with
a stage for musicians on the left side of the fountain. It was also
surrounded by seats and rose gardens in every corner
of the park
except at the bottom right
corner
where there was a glasshouse.
Today, the park
has undergone several changes. It has an additional entrance underground car park
on the right
corner
. Next,
the fountain is replaced with a rose garden, which is surrounded by benches. On the west side, there is a new facility, an amphitheatre for concerts. Lastly
, there is a new cafe and children's play area in the top right
corner
and a water feature in the bottom right
corner
.
To conclude
, the park
has undergone a huge renovation which mainly focuses on adding new facilities.Submitted by kelly on
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