The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
The pie graph presents the nutrients
avalliable
in 2 different meals ( Medium Baked Potato and Macaroni).
From an Correct your spelling
available
overall
view, In both meals
Add a comma
meals,
the
Carbohydrates were the largest component. 35% in the first dinner, And 52% in the 2nd dinner.
Correct article usage
apply
Firstly
, Medium Baked Potato composed
mostly Add a missing verb
is composed
out
of Carbs (35%), Change preposition
apply
Then
Protein at 25%. Glocose
and other nutrients represented the same percentage (15%) , Correct your spelling
Glucose
Lastly
, Saturated fat was only 11%.
Secondly
, In Macaroni, More than half of the calories are from Carbs at 52%, Followed by 21% of Saturated fat. Additionally
, Protein and Glocose
had Correct your spelling
Glucose
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a semilar
semilar
representation of 11%. Correct your spelling
similar
lastly
5% for other nutrients.
all and all, cabs were
the highest Verb problem
had
pecentage
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percentage
in
both meals. followed Change preposition
for
bu
protein in the first meal and by Saturated fat in the second meal.Correct your spelling
by
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