The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.

You should write at least 150 words.
The pie graph presents the nutrients
avalliable
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available
in 2 different meals ( Medium Baked Potato and Macaroni). From an
overall
view, In both
meals
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the
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Carbohydrates were the largest component. 35% in the first dinner, And 52% in the 2nd dinner.
Firstly
, Medium Baked Potato
composed
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mostly
out
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of Carbs (35%),
Then
Protein at 25%.
Glocose
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Glucose
and other nutrients represented the same percentage (15%) ,
Lastly
, Saturated fat was only 11%.
Secondly
, In Macaroni, More than half of the calories are from Carbs at 52%, Followed by 21% of Saturated fat.
Additionally
, Protein and
Glocose
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Glucose
had
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a semilar
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semilar
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similar
representation of 11%.
lastly
5% for other nutrients. all and all, cabs
were
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had
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the highest
pecentage
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percentage
in
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for
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both meals. followed
bu
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by
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protein in the first meal and by Saturated fat in the second meal.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "lastly".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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