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The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the three major causes - industry,
transportation
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 and electricity - of gas emissions of four countries, namely China, America, Japan and Australia, in the year 2012, measured in parts per million (
PPM
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).
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the industrial factor was the major cause of poor
air
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quality
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 in China and Japan,
while
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 pollutants from
transportation
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 and electricity generation were the major sources in America and Australia.
According to
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 the data, the Chinese and the Japanese experience bad
air
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quality
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 which is mainly caused by their countries' factory activities, contributed by 80
PPM
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 and around 41
PPM
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, respectively. The other causes of
air
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 pollution in the two Asian countries,
such
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 as emissions from
transportation
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 and electric tool usage, contributed
by
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70
PPM
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 and approximately 59
PPM
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 in China and 30
PPM
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 and around 15
PPM
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 in Japan.
On the other hand
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, most of the factors behind the decreasing
quality
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 of
air
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 in America
was
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due to
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 their people's mobilization using
transportation
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, which occurred to emit about 59
PPM
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 of
air
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 pollutants
as
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 their highest level,
while
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 the greenhouse gases generated from industrial and electrical usage were each about half of that amount.
Furthermore
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, Australia is the country with the best
air
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quality
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 for its people, compared with the other nations provided in the figure, where all
the
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three major factors of
air
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 pollutants only contributed by around 20
PPM
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 each.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, ppm, air, quality with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollution levels
  • sources of pollution
  • industrial pollution
  • transportation-related pollution
  • household pollution
  • highest levels
  • lowest levels
  • notable changes
  • anomalies
  • comparisons
  • summarise
  • highlight
  • analyze
  • chart
  • data
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