The diagrams below give information about the manufacutre of frozen fish pies. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided process indicates data about how a frozen fish pie is produced.
A glance at the process reveals that there are several steps for providing frozen fish pie
that is
comprised of two lines of production,starting from delivering potatoes
and providing salmon
and then
finishing with storing them in the fridge.
First of all,the potatoes
are brought to a factory up
to one month by a track,in order to be cleaned.Change preposition
for up
Following
this
,the potatoes
are peeled and sliced in a dedicated size.Afterwards,the sliced potatoes
are boiled in
100 degrees in a square-shaped container in order to be ready to chill and Change preposition
at
then
they are stored in a pocket.
For preparing fresh salmon
,The next step is
that the fresh salmon
are spiced by
lemon juice and salt,in order to be put in a steam oven for 12 hours or less.Once the skins and bones of the spiced Change preposition
with
salmon
have been removed,they are then
inspected by a worker.After that,prepared peas and sauce are splashed on the grilled salmon
and then
they are wrapped with mixed potatoes
by a man to be ready to freeze in the refrigerator.Eventually,the frozen product is stored to
a shelf for Change preposition
on
disptching
.Correct your spelling
dispatching
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