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The table shows the amount of money given to developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010. (Figures are in millions of dollars). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the amount of money given to developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010. (Figures are in millions of dollars). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The present table compares data about the amount of
money
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 given to developing
countries
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 by 3 different districts namely, the USA, EU
countries
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 and other
countries
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 between 2006 and 2010 per billion US dollars.
Overall
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, the number of
money
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 which other
countries
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 spend on developing
countries
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 increased, and in there The United the stase America had a larger section
instead
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 of other
countries
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 in the period of 4 years.
According to
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 the chart, the US was the first country which help developing
countries
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 because at the beginning of 2006, had 9.7 which was higher than half of the Total
money
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;
then
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this
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 trend rose to 22.7 in 2010 which was approximately 8 less than the whole
money
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.
However
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, the second and third levels were for European
countries
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 and other
countries
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 respectively which had waved figures
due to
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 the fact European
countries
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, in the start had 3.3;
thereafter
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, claimed to 3.8 in 2008, but the amount declined after that in 2010, touched the peak by 4.
In addition
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, other
countries
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 had the same situation, yet in 2009 reached a minimum of 2.6. Later the trend grew to 3.3 in 2010.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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