The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.

The graph below gives information on the number of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
The given line graph depicts the number of individuals who participated in various activities in the social centre for a
period
of two decades in Australia. To outline the main point, the Film club by far is the most popular activity among participants throughout
this
period
. The most popular activity remained steady during
this
period
, similar to the Martial arts figure with almost 65 and 35 person participation respectively in
this
period
. A zero interest in Musical performance for an initial 5 years was followed by a 5-year drastic surge and a one-decade marginal increase. The trend reached almost 20 people in 2020, similar to the initial figure for Table tennis. The initial popularity of Table tennis was followed by 5-year stability with 20 participants. At
this
point its popularity soared in Amateur dramatics,
then
after five years soared in Martial arts at a point near 40 in the year 2015. The trend continued for almost 5 years, which reached 55 individuals. A gradual fall after an initial 5-year slight rise was demonstrated by the graph, with almost from the maximum number of 30 people that dropped to approximately below ten.
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