The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households in three income categories as a proportion of their income. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar charts give information about the average Household spending patterns as a proportion of income divided into three incomes ( Low, Medium and High). the income measured in dollars.

Overall

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, The people spent on Housing and Transportation represent more than 27% and 15% and above respectively, In all aspects of income.

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the less money

spend

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on Eating out and Education which appear the latest in the graph. In terms of, People with more than $150,000 (high) profits spending on housing and Retirement saving around 27% and 17% respectively. And they are less spending money on Eating out about 4% and Education as well

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is 7%.

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, for Persons with Low and Medium profits which represent ( $15,000- $75,000) their money goes on Housing was the same (29%), And on the Educational process less than 5%,

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the Eating out

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, less than 5%.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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income category
household spending
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mid-income households
high-income households
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