The chart below shows the average household spending pattern for households in three income categories as a proportion of their income. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts give information about the average Household spending patterns as a proportion of income divided into three incomes ( Low, Medium and High). the income measured in dollars.

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, The people spent on Housing and Transportation represent more than 27% and 15% and above respectively, In all aspects of income.

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the less money

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on Eating out and Education which appear the latest in the graph. In terms of, People with more than $150,000 (high) profits spending on housing and Retirement saving around 27% and 17% respectively. And they are less spending money on Eating out about 4% and Education as well

Entertainment

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as Entertainment

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is 7%.

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, for Persons with Low and Medium profits which represent ( $15,000- $75,000) their money goes on Housing was the same (29%), And on the Educational process less than 5%,

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as

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,

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the Eating out

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, less than 5%.