Every weekend you and a few close friends meet to play a team sport. Last week one of your friends had an accident and was hospitalised. Since he was not able to make it you decide to write a letter to him, telling him about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Dear Harry
How are you? Hope you are recovering well after you met that car accident. Every week during
a cricket matches
we are immensely missing you. Correct the article-noun agreement
a cricket match
cricket matches
Last
week we had a match
against a Trichy team
and we won the match
by 45 runs.
It was a nail-biting match
till the last
ball. We will very
confident. We won the toss and elected to bat first. It was a cloudy and windy day. We had Add a missing verb
be very
tough
time Add an article
a tough
in
hitting the boundaries. We lost all wickets very quickly and Change preposition
apply
whole
Correct article usage
the whole
team
collapsed at 85 runs still we did not give a
hope and decided to fight. We performed well in the bowling and fielding. Our Remove the article
apply
team
bowlers were giving a very tough to the opponent team
batsman. They were struggled
to get the runs in each over, Change to the active voice
struggled
have struggled
eventually
we Add a comma
eventually,
restrict
them to score 40 runs and we had a fantastic victory. We won by 45 runs.
Our Wrong verb form
restricted
team
and friends were feeling very happy. We all were missing
you dearly. Next month we have a Wrong verb form
miss
match
with Mumbai. I hope you will recover soon to come to stadium
Correct article usage
the stadium
visit
the Fix the infinitive
to visit
match
. As your presence will be very motivating. I wish you a speedy recovery. I will come and meet you next week.
Yours friendly
JamesSubmitted by smsundaram57 on
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coherence cohesion
Remember to break down your ideas into separate paragraphs for better clarity and flow. Each paragraph should convey a single idea.
grammar
Make sure to double-check for any grammatical errors and phrasing issues to improve the readability of your letter.
task achievement
Your tone is very friendly and suitable for writing to a close friend.
coherence cohesion
The opening and closing of your letter are well done, providing a nice personal touch.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,