The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
These two pie charts demonstrate the
comperison
of Correct your spelling
comparison
nutrition
components of two meals: Replace the word
nutritional
macaroni
and medium baked potato
. At the
first Correct article usage
apply
blush
it Add a comma
blush,
seem
that there is a basic difference Change the verb form
seems
on
Change preposition
in
it's
consistency.
Replace the word
its
Firstly
, percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
carbohydrate
. It's an Fix the agreement mistake
carbohydrates
increase
content of them in the Change the verb form
increased
macaroni
meal - 52% , and 35% in the potato
meal. Saturated fat takes the
second Correct article usage
apply
place
in pasta with 21%, and the
fourth Correct article usage
apply
place
in potato
with only 10%. The third place
in macaroni
meal devides
between protein and glucose, both of them with 11%, and in Correct your spelling
divides
divided
potato
they take second and third place
with 25% and 15% rerespectively
.
Correct your spelling
respectively
Furthermore
, there are more no-name nutrients in the
both meals - 5% in pasta, and 15% in Remove the article
apply
medium
baked Add an article
a medium
potato
.
In conclusion, we can see from these pie graphs, that the macaroni
dinner is less healthy than the medium baked potato
meal.Submitted by anastasia on
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words macaroni, potato, place with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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