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Air transport is increasingly use to exported fruits and vegetables to countries where they can not be grown or out of seasons . What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#air #transport #fruits #vegetables #countries #seasons
Although
 aeroplanes are very fast when flying and
it
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delivers
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deliver
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 fresh
fruits
,
on the other hand
, it is
also
 very expensive.
Therefore
, it is important to
transport
vegetables
as well as
fruits
 to other countries or even abroad, but it demands more money.
Thus
, I am going
urge
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to urge
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 both drawbacks and benefits of using flights as a transportation in the forthcoming essay.
Initially
, mangoes, apples
as well as
 cabbages will arrive
it's
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at's
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 destination, whilst they are still fresh.
This
 can clearly show the
quickerness
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quickness
 of a plane and
also
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the customer
a customer
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customer
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customers
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 will buy current products when they are doing shopping.A very good example to illustrate that could be my native country
South
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, South
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 Africa, in South Africa, farmers
they
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grow sweet
mango
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mangoes
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 and export
it
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them
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 to Poland using cargo flights,
hence
, Poland will usually receive
freshly
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fresh
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fruits
 all the time.
This
is
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clearly
shown
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shows
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 that air
transport
 is mostly fast and convenient. On the other side, transporting
vegetables
 using airlines is more and more expensive,
many
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and many
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 companies cannot cover all the costs,
while
 they are delivering
such
 raw materials
to
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abroad.
For
instance
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instance,
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 a long ago in the 19th century, Zimbabwe tried to
transport
 cabbages and covo to the UK and after
some
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a
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 few years it
become
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became
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 bankrupt
due to
 the
miscalcutions
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miscalculations
miscalculation
 of the capital needed compared to
expense
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the expense
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 and the profit outcome.
Moreover
, from that time until now Zimbabwe is
nolonger
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no longer
 deliver
vegetables
 abroad using a flight.
This
,
also
prove
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proves
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 that exporting cabbages using aeroplanes
it's
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is
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 unprofitable.
To conclude
, flights are now trending in terms of exporting fresh products
such
 as
fruits
 and
vegetables
 to other states,
however
, using that type of
transport
 is expensive but it
is
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apply
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also
deliver
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delivers
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 goods as freshly as it can.
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task achievement
Try to provide more balanced arguments by exploring both advantages and disadvantages equally. This will give a more rounded perspective on the topic.
coherence cohesion
Work on using transitional words and phrases more effectively to improve the logical flow between points and paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Avoid repeating ideas. For instance, you mentioned the expensiveness of air transport multiple times without adding new information.
task achievement
Good use of specific examples such as the South African mangoes and Zimbabwean cabbages to support your points.
task achievement
You presented both advantages and disadvantages of using air transport for exporting fruits and vegetables, showing an understanding of the topic.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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