The pie charts show the spending habits of people in the UK in 1971 and 2001. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data.
The pie charts
depicts
the percentage of money Change the verb form
depict
spending
on Replace the word
spent
life
needs of individuals in Correct article usage
the life
UK
in 1971 and 2001.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
The most expenditure takes cars
production and investments Fix the agreement mistake
car
on
nourishment, Change preposition
in
while
over time needs for gadgets and paper books fluctuate
Firstly
, in 1971 people mostly tend
to Wrong verb form
tended
spent
Change the form of the verb
spend
one half
of their budget on food supplements and Add a hyphen
one-half
one fifth
of Add a hyphen
one-fifth
salary
on vehicles
The Identical picture we see in 1971, Correct pronoun usage
their salary
as well as
in
nowadays the tangible share namely nearly 10-12 Change preposition
apply
percent
of family income was devoted to the petrol
Change the spelling
per cent
Secondly
, after 30 years ,priorities of The Uk
residents have changed dramatically since the expenses for food provision Correct your spelling
UK
has
declined by three times and had only 14 Correct subject-verb agreement
have
Fix the agreement mistake
percent
percents
Correct your spelling
per cent
In contrast
with past
progressive Add an article
the past
a past
manufacturer
of cars and computers caused Fix the agreement mistake
manufacturers
rise
in expenditure, Correct article usage
a rise
hence
,doubled
spending on cars and significantly Wrong verb form
doubling
increased
demand Wrong verb form
increasing
on
Change preposition
for
PC
and laptopsFix the agreement mistake
PCs
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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