Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

In

this

day and age,

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study

is more beneficial for students

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become a broad

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in the general public. Some people argue that it is good for pupils to learn on their own.

However

, it seems to me that cooperating with others and making progress alone have both sides. The following essay will shed light on

this

view.

To begin

with, these people hold

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ideas

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that

study

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studying

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in

group

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the group

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is effective. A very important point to consider

that

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is that

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learning in

group

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a group

the group

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helps pupils know how to interact with their

group

mates.

This

means that

schoolchild

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schoolchildren

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have a valuable conversation to

discussion

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and solutions to address the problems. To illustrate

this

point, a good example

for

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this

is that when they give a presentation of their team product for

teacher

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teachers

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and classmates; during their sessions, if they face to conflict, they would solve it in the team. Another point

i

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would like to make is that

puplis

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pupils

can improve their personal skill and

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problem-solving

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skills through working as a band.

This

is

because

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the fact that the schoolchild

facilitate

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facilitates

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constructive discussions and

develop

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develops

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together.

On the other hand

, others think that learning

individual

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individually

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is better. They believe that the

students

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more students

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more

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are more

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independently

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independent

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in

study

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, the more they will focus on lessons.

For instance

, when the student

need

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needs

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to learn by heart their lesson, they would like to

learning

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learn

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on their own than in

group

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a group

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.

Moreover

, it is evident that when students

study

by themselves, they can prioritize their private

target

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targets

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.

To sum up

, people should have

further

consideration on

this

issue. In my opinion, they should adopt some ways to learn in groups or

study

lonesome is

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alone, it

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depend

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depends

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on

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the pupils

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pupils

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pupils'

pupil's

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choice.

However

, both learning methods

also

have advantages and disadvantages, schoolchildren need to know how to control and balance between

group

study

and self-

study

.