in many countires nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over tha world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Customers, who come from different
place
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, can buy multiple
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and snacks, which
produce
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in
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other countries, in a
supermarket
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in the present. It brings the
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con
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for the
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society and their
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. In my opinion,
this
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situation is a positive development rather than a negative
developent
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development

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. In the following essay will
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discuss

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the world issue. From the
quailties
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qualities

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of life
prespective
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, it is
advanteaged
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for the
citiziens
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, who focus on the type of
food
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. As we know some special
food
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is
the
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yummy and
taste
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good but it is difficult to have if we do not visit other countries.
However
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, people can buy
food
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easy
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then
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they can try to have it since they buy these in their local
supermarket
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. It is no denying that the
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idea, it impacts the travel
industy
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industry

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, is true,
while
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it is not the majority.
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, sushi is
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food
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from Japan and is sold in the
supermarket
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everywhere.
Hence
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, it does not have a drawback that
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the travel
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industry

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.
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,
poorers
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poor people

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may not have experience and
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to go
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other place
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to taste
the
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international
food
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,
then
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it
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the
oppertunity
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for them.
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the survey, almost 30% of Hong Kong residents
is
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under the
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line, which is approximately $10000 each month. They
are
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hard to go the other places, excluding
Mainland
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that
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they have no chance
for
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buy
food
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.
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they have
saving
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every year, they may save a long time and visit
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close
place
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such
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as Asia
countires
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.
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, the situation in the
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is helpful for them today
becuase
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because

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they try different
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.
To conclude
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, it is
benefital
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beneficial

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for consumers to taste
food
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, which produces all over the world. Someone
aruges
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argues
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that it develops a disadvantage but visitors do not consider it if they go to travel. I think the life
quailities
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qualities

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is
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the most important for people.

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coherence
Focus on organizing your paragraphs more effectively. Each paragraph should represent one clear idea and flow smoothly to the next.
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Work on providing more specific examples to support your arguments. This will strengthen your main points.
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Ensure that your introduction clearly states your position and your conclusion summarizes your main points effectively.
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