The two pie charts give information on the propotion of males and females in employment in six general categories in 1992, they divided into manual and non-manual
The present pie diagrams compare data about the percentage of men and women who worked in 6 different items in two divisions namely,
craft
or similar, general labourers, other manuals, manage and professional, clerical or related, and other non-manual in 1992.
overall
, most females like to work non-manually especially in clerical or related, yet males' preference was manual in Craft
or similar categories.
According to
the females' graph, non-manual was the best work which had Nearly three quarters, and in there clerical or related was the first one with 31%; then
manage and professional was roughly the same as other manuals by approximately 30 per
cent. Later, other non-manual, Change preposition
apply
craft
or similar, and general labourers respectively had small proportions.
The males' chart shows manual less amount larger than non-manual; however
, men manage and professional by 36% was the first level. Later craft
or similar nearly the same as other manuals by 25 per cent; furthermore
, clerical and related was absolutely the same as other non-manual by 6%; thereafter
the last
one was general labourers.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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