This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
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This
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line graph illustrates the percentages of material (
paper
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and
cardboard
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, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics) recycled in a specific country from 1982 to 2010.
Overall
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, the amount of all the items recycled increased with
paper
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and
cardboard
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being the most recycled material. Interestingly, there was a sharp increase in the percentage of aluminium cans repurposed.
However
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, plastics were the least recycled items throughout the given period. Analysing the graph
further
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, about 65% of
paper
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and
cardboard
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was recycled in 1982,
this
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figure fluctuated over the next eight years after which it peaked at precisely 80%. In the following two decades,
this
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percentage gradually reduced before
finally
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settling at 70% by 2010. With regards to glass containers, 50% of containers were recycled in 1982, a downward trend was observed in the following years till 1990 reaching 40%.
After
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this
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point an opposite trend can be observed when compared to
paper
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and
cardboard
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, increasing gradually and
finally
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reaching 60% by 2010. Moving ahead, the recycling of aluminium cans and plastics was at around 5% in 1986 and 1990 respectively. The former experienced a dramatic increase throughout the given time period peaking at 45% in 2010. The latter ,
however
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, showed no significant changes and climbed to just under 10% by 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally, however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, cardboard with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • increased
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic
  • glass
  • metal
  • significant increase
  • relatively stable
  • fluctuating
  • period
  • starting
  • reaching
  • gradually increasing
  • remained low
  • experienced
  • showed
  • greatest
  • proportion
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