You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The provided map illustrates how a rural area in the Ryemouth has changed from 1995 to the present.
Overall
,the whole
village
has experienced a lot of construction and development over the period. In 1995,there used to be
a
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farmland in the northeast of the Ryemouth,But It has been changed into
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court recently.
Also
,there was a forest park at the bottom of the farmland with many similar trees in the east of
rural
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region,
While
the government has demolished and transformed it into two tennis courts.Another interesting development is the construction of more houses in the northwest of Ryemouth
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sides of the road from 1995 to recent years.
Also
,the main road in the middle of the
village
has levelled off from the past until now. It is interesting to note that,A cafe
in
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opposite
of
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the hotel has remained unchanged in the southeast of the
village
from 1995 until now.
Moreover
,there
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not
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a car park near the hotel in 1995.But,the government has introduced a car park next to the hotel recently.Another notable change is that the fishing port has been pulled down in the south of the
village
.
Moreover
,there
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some shops in the southwest of the area which have been replaced by several restaurants.
In addition
,there were some fish markets in front of the sea which have been turned into four various apartments.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, moreover".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • main road
  • housing development
  • farmland
  • forest
  • golf course
  • tennis courts
  • fishing port
  • apartments
  • commercial services
  • supermarket
  • local shop
  • consumer needs
  • cafe
  • hotel
  • tourism
  • recreational facilities
  • residential areas
  • infrastructure
  • priorities
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