You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The provided map illustrates how a rural area in the Ryemouth has changed from 1995 to the present.

Overall

,the whole

village

has experienced a lot of construction and development over the period. In 1995,there used to be

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farmland in the northeast of the Ryemouth,But It has been changed into

golf

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court recently.

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,there was a forest park at the bottom of the farmland with many similar trees in the east of

rural

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the rural

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region,

While

the government has demolished and transformed it into two tennis courts.Another interesting development is the construction of more houses in the northwest of Ryemouth

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sides of the road from 1995 to recent years.

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,the main road in the middle of the

village

has levelled off from the past until now. It is interesting to note that,A cafe

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opposite

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the hotel has remained unchanged in the southeast of the

village

from 1995 until now.

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,there

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a car park near the hotel in 1995.But,the government has introduced a car park next to the hotel recently.Another notable change is that the fishing port has been pulled down in the south of the

village

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some shops in the southwest of the area which have been replaced by several restaurants.

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,there were some fish markets in front of the sea which have been turned into four various apartments.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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1Word repetition
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9Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

223 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

main road
housing development
farmland
forest
golf course
tennis courts
fishing port
apartments
commercial services
supermarket
local shop
consumer needs
cafe
hotel
tourism
recreational facilities
residential areas
infrastructure
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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental damage is a problem in most countries. What is the cause of this damage? What should be done about this problem?

Studies have shown that many young children worry about their appearance. What are the reasons for this? What might best be done to reduce the problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In the future all cars ,buses and trucks will be driver less.The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driver less vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

Many museums and historical sites are mostly visited by foreign tourists, but not local people. Why do you think it happens? What can be done to attract local visitors to these sites?