The graph below gives information about the percentage of population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020 with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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So if we see from 1970 to 2040 predictions the percentage only
increase
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it only gets worse for the people because the services that are in the city are not provided in the countries so with Use synonyms
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the people will move out
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the city has and the countries haven't is better living better Schools better jobs better places to go
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one of the reasons is the services it not always their sometimes the light goes off Linking Words
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and that's what makes the population in the countries move out and leave the town to move to the city as we can see in Malaysia how percentage goes up in no Fix the agreement mistake
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Indonesia from 2000 to 2020 how it went up very fast whit no Linking Words
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and that's whyUse synonyms
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