The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrated the changes in islands before and after the development of tourist sites. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that many new facilities have been constructed for tourists, including accommodations,
reception
, restaurants, swimming facilities, etc., and those have been built without affecting natural resources that much. Before the development, there were only trees and beaches on the islands and most of the places were empty .
First,
a
reception
building has been constructed in the centre of the island. There are 16 accommodations near the
reception
. Introducing a pier can give a chance to access boats or yachts safely. The restaurant is open to tourists to provide delicious meals. There have been vehicle roads around
reception
.
Also
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footpaths for pedestrians have been constructed on the island.
Overall
, the construction was mainly built to tourist facilitate the tourist's stay, visit and amusement and for that, no trees or plants were cut.
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