The bar chart below shows the number of employed persons by job type and sex for Australia last year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart here illustrates the number of men and women employed in Australia
last
year in seven different category
which are, managers, Change to a plural noun
categories
professionals
, semi-professionals
, tradespeople, production, clerical, Correct word choice
and laboureres
laboureres
. The number is counted in Correct your spelling
labourers
labourer
thousands
.
In summery
, men predominated in almost all Correct your spelling
summary
category
except for the Fix the agreement mistake
categories
jobs
of professionals
and clerical.
Incase of males, the highest amount was employed in the tradespeople jobs
where the number was at staggering
900 thousand, very closely followed by clerical Correct article usage
a staggering
jobs
, just below 900 thousand. The least amount of male presence was in labourers jobs
, at 400 thousands
. Other Change to singular
thousand
jobs
such
as managers, professionals
, semi
Add a hyphen
semi-professionals
professionals
, production was occupied by 600, just above 600, around 500 and above 500 thousand of males.
On the other hand
, the highest amount of women were employed in clerical jobs
, reaching 1000 thousands
Change to singular
thousand
while
the last
positions was
occupied jointly Change the verb form
were
be
tradespeople and production Correct your spelling
by
jobs
at 100 thousands
. Other Change to singular
thousand
jobs
such
as managers, professionals
, semi
Add a hyphen
semi-professionals
professionals
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Vocabulary: Replace the words professionals, thousands, jobs with synonyms.
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