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The below graph shows the population of Japanese in the past, present, and future trends and table informs the number of people aged over 65 years old in 1950, in 2005, in 2035, and 2055

The below graph shows the population of Japanese in the past, present, and future trends and table informs the number of people aged over 65 years old in 1950, in 2005, in 2035, and 2055
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The chart depicts the trend of the population of
japanese
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Japanese
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people
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 in three different times, the past, the present and the future time,
while
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 the table presents data on the
number
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 of elderly
people
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 above the age of 65 years in four different years, 1950, 2005, 2035 and 2055. There is a correlation between the two graphs. There were almost 85
million
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people
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 in 1950 and
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number
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the number
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 continuously increased to reach
the
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a
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 peak
at
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 127.8
million
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 in 2005 before dropping to slightly over 125
million
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 in 2015. The
number
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 dropped significantly for the next few decades and will predictably reach 89.9
million
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 in 2055. In the table, old Japanese was only a little over 4
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 which accounted for 4.9% of the total population. The figure increased to 25.7
million
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 or exactly 20% in 2005 and will keep increasing to 37.2% in 2035. in 2055,
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 predicted to drop to 36,5
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, the proportion increases to 41%. In conclusion, the two graphs describe the increasing trend of the
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 of
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aging
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 society in Japan. Despite the fact that the
number
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 of
people
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 increased greatly in 2005, it aligned with the increasing
number
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 of ageing
people
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 there. In the future, the trend is expected to be the same with more
people
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 growing old and covering almost half of society in 2035.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words people, number, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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