The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.
The bar charo
provide
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provides
an information
about different Remove the article
information
a piece of information
kind
of Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
games
in global sales from 2000 to 2006.
Overall
, it is evident that handheld games
were the mont
popular Correct your spelling
most
games
over the six-years
period. Correct your spelling
six-year
Whereas
, console games
were the second favour games
in global untill
2004.
In terms of handheld Correct your spelling
until
games
and computer games
, handheld games
fluctuated slightly between 2000 and 2006, while
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with
significant
increase from 11 Correct article usage
a significant
billion
in 2000 to 16 billion
in 2004. Computer games
were fall
markedly from 6 Change the verb form
fell
billion
in 2000 to 4 bilion
in 2003. Over the Correct your spelling
billion
six-years
period, handheld Correct your spelling
six-year
games
keep the best sales compared to other
three different types of Correct article usage
the other
games
.
Regarding mobile phone games
and online games
, mobile phone games
rose gradually from 2 billion
in 2002 to 7 billion
In 2006, over the four-years
period. Correct your spelling
four-year
In contrast
, online games
surged rapidly from 1 billion
in 2001 to 9 billion
in 2006. Both online games
and mobile phone games
became the second popular games
in 2005 and 2006, respectively.Submitted by zea14210209 on
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