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The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.

The bar graph shows the global sales (in billions of dollars) of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.
#bar #sales #billions #dollars #games
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provide
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an information
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 about different
kind
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kinds
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 of
games
 in global sales from 2000 to 2006.
Overall
, it is evident that handheld
games
 were the
mont
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most
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 popular
games
 over the
six-years
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six-year
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 period.
Whereas
, console
games
 were the second favour
games
 in global
untill
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until
 2004. In terms of handheld
games
 and computer
games
, handheld
games
 fluctuated slightly between 2000 and 2006,
while
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significant
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 increase from 11
billion
 in 2000 to 16
billion
 in 2004. Computer
games
were fall
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 markedly from 6
billion
 in 2000 to 4
bilion
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billion
 in 2003. Over the
six-years
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six-year
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 period, handheld
games
 keep the best sales compared to
other
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the other
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 three different types of
games
. Regarding mobile phone
games
 and online
games
, mobile phone
games
 rose gradually from 2
billion
 in 2002 to 7
billion
 In 2006, over the
four-years
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four-year
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 period.
In contrast
, online
games
 surged rapidly from 1
billion
 in 2001 to 9
billion
 in 2006. Both online
games
 and mobile phone
games
 became the second popular
games
 in 2005 and 2006, respectively.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words games, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trends
  • Surpassed
  • Advent
  • Steady growth
  • Fluctuating sales
  • Technological advancements
  • Proliferation
  • Year-on-year growth
  • Factors influencing
  • Peak sales
  • Demographic shifts
  • Engagement
  • Driving the sales
  • Blockbuster titles
  • Major game releases
  • Spurring
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