You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts provide information about the first place, accounting for 34.3%, followed by coal and gas, which were valued at 25.1% and 20.9% respectively.
energy
utilization and electricity
generated in the world
based on 7 categories from last
year's data.
It can be seen that oil
dominated more than one-third of the total percentage
of energy
consumption, while
the smallest percentage
was gained by hydro. On the other hand
, coal had the biggest percentage
of total world
electricity
produced, whereas
oil
ranked with the lowest percentage
.
In terms of world
energy
use, oil
was ranked inAdd an article
the
In contrast
, nuclear, combustible renewables, and hydro were placed last
for the total amount of electricity
consumption, with 10.6%, 6.5%, and 2.2% respectively.
Moreover
, for the total world
of energy
generation, coal obtained the highest percentage
, which was 39.8%. Additionally
, gas accounted for 19.6% of electricity
produced, whereas
hydro and nuclear differentiated by 3.5% and 3.9% from it. Lastly
, oil
accounted for the smallest percentage
of generated electricity
, which was valued at 6.7%.Submitted by faisa8687 on
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