You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The two pie charts below show total world energy consumption and electricity generation for last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The pie charts provide information about the
energy
utilization and
electricity
generated in the
world
based on 7 categories from
last
year's data. It can be seen that
oil
dominated more than one-third of the total
percentage
of
energy
consumption,
while
the smallest
percentage
was gained by hydro.
On the other hand
, coal had the biggest
percentage
of total
world
electricity
produced,
whereas
oil
ranked with the lowest
percentage
. In terms of
world
energy
use,
oil
was ranked in
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first place, accounting for 34.3%, followed by coal and gas, which were valued at 25.1% and 20.9% respectively.
In contrast
, nuclear, combustible renewables, and hydro were placed
last
for the total amount of
electricity
consumption, with 10.6%, 6.5%, and 2.2% respectively.
Moreover
, for the total
world
of
energy
generation, coal obtained the highest
percentage
, which was 39.8%.
Additionally
, gas accounted for 19.6% of
electricity
produced,
whereas
hydro and nuclear differentiated by 3.5% and 3.9% from it.
Lastly
,
oil
accounted for the smallest
percentage
of generated
electricity
, which was valued at 6.7%.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, electricity, world, oil, percentage with synonyms.
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