The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
The given chart depicts the employment status of Anthropology graduates from a particular university after completing their undergraduate degree course and the table illustrates the income of the anthropologists after 5-year
work
.
Overall
, the majority of students decide to work
full time after finishing their study
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studies
while
the percentage of them who work
part time
and concurrently Add a hyphen
part-time
enroll
in Change the spelling
enrol
postgrad
Add an article
the postgrad
study
was the lowest. Moreover
, after working 5 years, the portion of freelancer’s
salaries is similar to state staff’s income.
Beginning with the pie chart, the majority of graduates did full-time Fix the agreement mistake
freelancers’
work
after completing their degree in Anthropology with over a half while
the lowest number of those are doing a postgrad study
with part-time work
at just 5%. The figure
for part-time work
is 15% which is quite similar to that of being unemployed which makes up 12%. The proportion of people who did full-time
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the full-time
job
and concurrently joined in Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
postgrad
Add an article
the postgrad
study
and that
the Correct word choice
apply
figure
for unknown share the same figure
at 8%.
Turning to the table, the percentage of freelancers who receive the
salary between 25000$ and Correct article usage
a
under
75000$ is 20% which is similar to that of people who Change preposition
apply
work
for government
. 80% of freelance consultants and state staff earn over 75000$ after Add an article
the government
5-year
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5 years of
work
. However
, half of state employees make at least 100000$ while
just 40% of freelancer
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freelancers
did
that. 10% of graduates Wrong verb form
do
work
for private companies Correct pronoun usage
who work
earns
between 25000$ and under 50000$ which much lower than the Correct subject-verb agreement
earn
figure
for those who gain
over 50000$ at around 90%Verb problem
earn
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