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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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The given chart depicts the employment status of Anthropology graduates from a particular university after completing their undergraduate degree course and the table illustrates the income of the anthropologists after 5-year
work
.
Overall
, the majority of students decide to
work
 full time after finishing their
study
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studies
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while
 the percentage of them who
work
part time
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part-time
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 and concurrently
enroll
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enrol
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 in
postgrad
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the postgrad
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study
 was the lowest.
Moreover
, after working 5 years, the portion of
freelancer’s
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freelancers’
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 salaries is similar to state staff’s income. Beginning with the pie chart, the majority of graduates did full-time
work
 after completing their degree in Anthropology with over a half
while
 the lowest number of those are doing a postgrad
study
 with part-time
work
 at just 5%. The
figure
 for part-time
work
 is 15% which is quite similar to that of being unemployed which makes up 12%. The proportion of people who did
full-time
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the full-time
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job
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jobs
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 and concurrently joined in
postgrad
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the postgrad
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study
 and
that
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apply
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the
figure
 for unknown share the same
figure
 at 8%. Turning to the table, the percentage of freelancers who receive
the
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a
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 salary between 25000$ and
under
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apply
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75000$ is 20% which is similar to that of people who
work
 for
government
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the government
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. 80% of freelance consultants and state staff earn over 75000$ after
5-year
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5 years of
work
.
However
, half of state employees make at least 100000$
while
 just 40% of
freelancer
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freelancers
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did
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do
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 that. 10% of graduates
work
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who work
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 for private companies
earns
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earn
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 between 25000$ and under 50000$ which much lower than the
figure
 for those who
gain
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earn
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 over 50000$ at around 90%
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 69%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, study, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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