The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the overseas globetrotters who visited five destinations between 1990 to 2005 in millions.
Overall
, the total number of visitors increased every five years
. The most favourite tourist destination was Europe as compared to other nationals.The Middle East was the lowest, where tourists
experienced less interest in travel.
It is conspicuous that the total number of tourists
who visited all destinations was 448.9 million
in 1990, which augmented every 5 years
of intervals and reached 693.7 million
in 2005. Likewise
, in European countries, tourists
visited 280.2 million
in 1995 and after it was expanded to 400.2 million
in 2005. The second highest was America, where tourists
travelled 80.5 million
in 1995 with a continuous growth every 5 years
hitting 118.2 million
in 2000 after it declined to 113.2 million
in 2005.
Probing ahead, Asia and the Pacific countries attained increments of 60.2 million
to 135.8 million
in 2005 from the period 1990 to 2005, with a regular increment every five years
. Lastly
, the Middle East was at the lowest spot with 9.8 million
in 1990, which experienced continuous enlargement to 15.8 million
in 2005.Submitted by rbtech65 on
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