The table below gives information about a bakery's average sales in three different branches in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main ifeatures, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table provides some data about the average trades
a
Change preposition
in a
bakery’s
in different branches in 2015.
In general, the Vancouver of Georgia Change noun form
bakery
Street
was
bigger sales than Verb problem
had
other
. Fix the agreement mistake
others
In contrast
, the Vancouver of Drake
Street
was the smallest.
To begin
with, Chicken
burger was the most popular item in
Georgia Change preposition
on
Street
that
the Correct word choice
and
number
of transactions were
the highest at 854. Change the verb form
was
Similarly
, the number
of transaction value
(cost at $10.69), eat-in (at 405) and take-away (at 449) were dominated by Fix the agreement mistake
values
chicken
burger
in Georgia Fix the agreement mistake
burgers
street
. Capitalize word
Street
Followed
that was Dunsmuir Replace the word
Following
Street
with the popular
item Correct quantifier usage
most popular
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
chicken
wings of
the most total transactions at 750.
Change preposition
with
However
, the transaction value in Dunsmuir was smaller than other
only at $5.61 but the Fix the agreement mistake
others
number
of eat-in
and Correct your spelling
eat-ins
take away
were higher than Correct your spelling
takeaway
Drake
Street
at 358 and 392 respectively.
On the other hand
, the least
Correct word choice
lowest
number
sales
was the Vancouver of Change preposition
of sales
Drake
Street
with chicken
pasta was
the famous food at just 390. Even though Correct your spelling
as
chicken
pasta more
expensive than Add a missing verb
is more
chicken
wings, with price
at $9.02. In detail, the Correct article usage
the price
number
Change preposition
of eat-in
eat-in
and Correct your spelling
eat-ins
take-away
in Correct your spelling
take-aways
Drake
street
Capitalize word
Street
were
the smallest, at 200 and 190 of each.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words street, drake, chicken, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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