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The bar chart below shows the number of students who studied three different subjects in 2001, 2002 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the number of students who studied three different subjects in 2001, 2002 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates how many male and female
students
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 attended eight university courses, namely
Science
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, Mathematics, Social
Science
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, Languages, Humanities, the Arts, Literature and Law, in the year
of
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2005.
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,
it is clear that
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 most of the university's male
students
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 chose to study
Science
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,
while
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 the females mainly preferred to take the Social
Science
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 class.
According to
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 the data,
Science
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 was the most favoured subject among male
students
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 with around 23
thousand
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 attendees. Their second and third preferences were Mathematics and Literature studies, with approximately 18
thousand
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 and around 16
thousand
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students
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, respectively. Each of the remaining five courses,
however
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, had no more than 15
thousand
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 male
students
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.
On the other hand
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, Social
Science
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 was the subject with nearly 25
thousand
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 female attendees, making it the course with the highest number of female
students
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 during the year. The second favorite subject among the female
students
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were
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 Languages, which was taken by about 17
thousand
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students
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.
In addition
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, it is evident that the Humanities and Literature subjects had the same amount of female
students
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, at around 12
thousands
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 each. Meanwhile, the remaining subjects,
such
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 as
Science
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, the Arts, Law and Mathematics, were attended by no more than 11
thousand
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 female
students
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 throughout the period.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, science, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart, illustrates, number of students, academic years
  • Trends, increased, decreased, remained stable
  • Popularity, more students, consistently, annually
  • Highest figure, lowest figure, peaked at, hit a low of
  • Reasons for trends, job market demand, curriculum changes
  • Summarize, key points, shifts in preferences, data overview
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