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The bar chart below shows the number of students who studied three different subjects in 2001, 2002 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the number of students who studied three different subjects in 2001, 2002 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates how many male and female
students
 attended eight university courses, namely
Science
, Mathematics, Social
Science
, Languages, Humanities, the Arts, Literature and Law, in the year
of
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2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 most of the university's male
students
 chose to study
Science
,
while
 the females mainly preferred to take the Social
Science
 class.
According to
 the data,
Science
 was the most favoured subject among male
students
 with around 23
thousand
 attendees. Their second and third preferences were Mathematics and Literature studies, with approximately 18
thousand
 and around 16
thousand
students
, respectively. Each of the remaining five courses,
however
, had no more than 15
thousand
 male
students
.
On the other hand
, Social
Science
 was the subject with nearly 25
thousand
 female attendees, making it the course with the highest number of female
students
 during the year. The second favorite subject among the female
students
were
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 Languages, which was taken by about 17
thousand
students
.
In addition
, it is evident that the Humanities and Literature subjects had the same amount of female
students
, at around 12
thousands
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 each. Meanwhile, the remaining subjects,
such
 as
Science
, the Arts, Law and Mathematics, were attended by no more than 11
thousand
 female
students
 throughout the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, science, thousand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart, illustrates, number of students, academic years
  • Trends, increased, decreased, remained stable
  • Popularity, more students, consistently, annually
  • Highest figure, lowest figure, peaked at, hit a low of
  • Reasons for trends, job market demand, curriculum changes
  • Summarize, key points, shifts in preferences, data overview
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