Task 1 The diagram below shiws the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the procedures of
swetener
production, from Correct your spelling
sweetener
sugar
cane transforming to candy forms.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are seven stages to producing sugar
, where conventional ways are combined with modern and automatic machines from the beginning until the final process.
To begin
with, sugar
cane which has grown between 12 to 18 months is harvested by a harvesting machine or through a conventional way collected by hand. After that, sugar
cane is crushed by a crushing machine and the output is in Juice forms. Following
this
, the juice is purified by a limestone filter and then
the result is evaporated in an evaporator chamber at a high temperature to transform juice becomes syrup. In the subsequent stage, the syrup is processed by a centrifuge device in order to separate its saccarin
crystals from the syrup. Correct your spelling
saccharin
saccharine
Finally
, the Crystal Sugars are placed in containers for the drying and cooling process and then
ready to use as sugar
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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