The bar charts show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate the status of UK graduate and postgraduate students after finishing their
studies
in 2008, rather than having a full-time job. Overall
, it is clear that
most of the students from both type
of Change to a plural noun
types
studies
continued to pursue higher education after their graduation,
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apply
while
doing voluntary work was the least favored
choice.
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favoured
According to
the data, pursuing further
studies
were
the most Correct subject-verb agreement
was
favored
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favoured
preferences
by 29,665 people of graduate alumni and 2,725 Fix the agreement mistake
preference
postgraduates
. Their second preferences
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preference
were
doing part-time work, as chosen by 17,735 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
graduates
and 2,535 postgraduates
. Furthermore
, there were 3,500 graduates
and 345 postgraduates
who became volunteers after graduated
.
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graduation
On the other hand
, there were also
several alumni who were unemployed after graduated
during the period. There were 16,235 Wrong verb form
graduating
graduates
and 1,625 postgraduates
. Interestingly, the proportion of the four statuses, which are pursuing further
studies
, having part-time and voluntary work, and unemployed, by graduates
and postgraduates
fell at the same rate.Submitted by michellyonggo on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words studies, postgraduates, graduates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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