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The charts below give information about different types of waste disposal in one country in 1960 and 2011.

The charts below give information about different types of waste disposal in one country in 1960 and 2011.
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The pie charts contain information about various kinds of garbage thrown out in one country from 1960 to 2011. A glance at the charts provided reveals that
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the
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paper
waste
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 was dominant in 1960,
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 wood was the least utilized one.
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, in 2011,
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food was the highest
waste
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 disposal, but the smallest contribution was made by others. To be more detailed,
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textiles
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 the second highest misuse. In
this
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 year, there were no considerable differences in the percentage of food and other misuse.
In addition
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, plastic and metal garbage were
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 same level in 1960. As can be witnessed, in 2011, the plastic
waste
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 was increased substantially.
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, the paper misuse was decreased significantly.
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, the proportion of wood rubbish was 8%,
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 of other
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 was minimally lower at 4%. There were no changes in green
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 and glass rubbish in both years.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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