The table below gives information about a bakery's average sales in three different branches in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main ifeatures, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The provided table shows the three shops' sales (Vancouver
Georgia
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Street
, Vancouver Use synonyms
Dunsmuir
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Street
and Vancouver Use synonyms
Drake
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Street
). Use synonyms
In particular
categories Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
a
number of eat-ins, take-aways and value transactions.
Correct article usage
the
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
Georgia
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Street
was the highest achievement branch, Use synonyms
while
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Drake
Use synonyms
Street
had the least amount of selling. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
Dunsmuir
Use synonyms
Street
had the lowest average valuation.
In more detail, Use synonyms
Georgia
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Street
was the greatest valued store among the rest which received 854 dealings. Followed by Use synonyms
Dunsmuir
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Street
which experienced 750 numbers of transactions, Use synonyms
while
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Drake
Use synonyms
Street
witnessed a rock bottom among shops which was 390.
In terms of Use synonyms
a
number of eat-in and take-away transactions, it can be shown that Correct article usage
the
Georgia
Use synonyms
Street
was the most successful bakery which had 405 numbers of eat-in and 449 takeaway deals. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
Drake
Use synonyms
Street
was the worst selling which was 200 numbers of Use synonyms
eat-in
and 190 takeaway deals. Correct your spelling
eat-ins
In contrast
with transaction prices Linking Words
Dunsmuir
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Street
was the least amount of money that was $5.61.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words georgia, street, dunsmuir, drake with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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