The table below gives information about a bakery's average sales in three different branches in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main ifeatures, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The provided table shows the three shops' sales (Vancouver
Georgia
Street
, Vancouver Dunsmuir
Street
and Vancouver Drake
Street
). In particular
categories such
as a
number of eat-ins, take-aways and value transactions.
Correct article usage
the
Overall
, it can be seen that Georgia
Street
was the highest achievement branch, while
Drake
Street
had the least amount of selling. Moreover
, Dunsmuir
Street
had the lowest average valuation.
In more detail, Georgia
Street
was the greatest valued store among the rest which received 854 dealings. Followed by Dunsmuir
Street
which experienced 750 numbers of transactions, while
Drake
Street
witnessed a rock bottom among shops which was 390.
In terms of a
number of eat-in and take-away transactions, it can be shown that Correct article usage
the
Georgia
Street
was the most successful bakery which had 405 numbers of eat-in and 449 takeaway deals. However
, Drake
Street
was the worst selling which was 200 numbers of eat-in
and 190 takeaway deals. Correct your spelling
eat-ins
In contrast
with transaction prices Dunsmuir
Street
was the least amount of money that was $5.61.Submitted by fatmahaleesa on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words georgia, street, dunsmuir, drake with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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