The line graph below shows the average height of women born between 1946 and 1996 in European countries.

The line graph below shows the average height of women born between 1946 and 1996 in European countries.
This
line graph shows the average women's
height
in European countries between 1946 and 1996.From
this
graph, there are the
Netherlands
,
Latvia
,
Sweden
and France.For the
Netherlands
, from 1946 to 1972, women's
height
went up a
lot
but after 1972, it started to go down.In
Latvia
, the average woman's
height
is going up.
lot
from 1946 to 1996 without stopping or going down.For
Sweden
, from 146 to around 1972, it went up a little and after 1972 it started to go down a
lot
. At the
last
for France, it is going up a little by each year from 1946 to 1996.From
this
graph, most of
countries'
Correct article usage
the countries'
show examples
average women's
height
except
Latvia
changed a
lot
from 1972 to going down or going up.In 1946 the highest average woman
height
was the
Netherlands
at 166cm
however
, after around 1986,
Latvia
's average woman
height
became higher than the
Netherlands
. For
Sweden
, the average
height
in 1996 was lower than in 1946 which means that
Sweden
's average
height
went down the most than the other 3 countries.
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