The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles
The flowchart presents the recycling
process
to
Change preposition
for
plastic
. There are nine cycling steps
which begin with the first source of used plastic
bottles
collected and sorted,
and end with Remove the comma
apply
raw
material processing step to be new products to reuse.
The Correct article usage
the raw
process
commences with the illustration of people throwing plastic
bottles
and other garbage in a trash can, which
all of the trash is still Correct word choice
where
all
Correct determiner usage
apply
mixes
. Replace the word
mixed
Secondly
, all garbage
in many trash cans Correct article usage
the garbage
are
collected by dust Change the verb form
is
truck
. It continues with Fix the agreement mistake
trucks
sorting
Correct article usage
the sorting
process
in the recycling centre, which do
manually to separate Verb problem
is
plastic
bottles
from other trashes
.
Correct subject-verb agreement
trash
The next step is
compressing all plastic
bottles
into blocks. This
process
allows the machine to make the bottles
being cubic form. Subsequently
, all the blocks is
crushed using crusher devices, and continues with washing Change the verb form
are
steps
to clean all the flakes form of plastic
bottles
. All of the washed flakes need to heat up using stove
to produce Add an article
the stove
a stove
plastic
pellets. All the plastic
pellets are ingredients of raw material. After raw materials formed
, Add a missing verb
are formed
it
Correct pronoun usage
they
could
be used as various products, Wrong verb form
can
such
as clothes, food container
, Fix the agreement mistake
containers
bottle
and many more.
In general, those Fix the agreement mistake
bottles
steps
are being
cycling Unnecessary verb
apply
steps
. All the new products made from plastic
bottles
can be reduce
again to be new Change the verb form
be reduced
product
to use.Fix the agreement mistake
products
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Vocabulary: Replace the words process, plastic, steps, bottles with synonyms.
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