The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles
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The flowchart presents the recycling
process
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to
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plastic
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. There are nine cycling
steps
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which begin with the first source of used
plastic
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bottles
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collected and sorted
,
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and end with
raw
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the raw
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material processing step to be new products to reuse. The
process
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commences with the illustration of people throwing
plastic
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bottles
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and other garbage in a trash can,
which
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all of the trash is still
all
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mixes
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.
Secondly
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, all
garbage
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the garbage
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in many trash cans
are
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collected by dust
truck
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. It continues with
sorting
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the sorting
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process
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in the recycling centre, which
do
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manually to separate
plastic
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bottles
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from other
trashes
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trash
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.
The next step is
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compressing all
plastic
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bottles
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into blocks.
This
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process
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allows the machine to make the
bottles
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being cubic form.
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, all the blocks
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crushed using crusher devices, and continues with washing
steps
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to clean all the flakes form of
plastic
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bottles
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. All of the washed flakes need to heat up using
stove
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the stove
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to produce
plastic
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pellets. All the
plastic
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pellets are ingredients of raw material. After raw materials
formed
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,
it
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they
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could
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be used as various products,
such
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as clothes, food
container
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containers
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,
bottle
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bottles
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and many more. In general, those
steps
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are
being
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cycling
steps
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. All the new products made from
plastic
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bottles
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can
be reduce
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be reduced
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again to be new
product
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products
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to use.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, plastic, steps, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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