The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the percentage of citizens who owned
cars
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in Britain between 1971 and 2007. The proportion of people who had no car, which took the leading position in 1971, sharply dropped from less than 50% to about 24% in the period of 36 years.
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, the one-car citizens' percentage experienced a slight fluctuation between about 43% and 44%, which almost remained stable, taking the leading position.
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, a substantial increase
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the figure for individuals who had two
cars
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can be witnessed, overtaking that of no-car people in around 2004, taking the second with more than 25%.
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, even though the figure for the proportion of citizens who had three or more
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cars
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car
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ownership went up steadily to around 7%, it still maintained the
last
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in
this
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36-year period.
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, it is easily apparent that the percentage of no-car people declined,
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the data
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individuals who had two
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and three or more
cars
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showed upward trends.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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