The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
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The two diagrams show the inner workings of a wave-energy
machine
and how it is affected by location. The first diagram shows how the
machine
works. It is placed against the direction of the wave, having an opening at the bottom which takes in
water
-
this
part is the
water
chamber There is
also
a vent which allows
air
to flow in from the top. As the
water
level rises, an upward flow of
air
is created, which allows the
air
to circulate throughout the
machine
when combined
the
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with the
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downward
air
.
This
spins the turbines in the compartment above the
water
chamber, which activates the electricity generator. The second diagram shows the options for placing wave-energy machines. If placed near the shore,
installations
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installation
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costs are reduced at the expense of performance - waves are weaker the closer they are to land. Moving out
further
to sea will boost output as waves are larger, but installing the
machine
will come at high expenses.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words machine, water, air with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • wave-energy machine
  • kinetic energy
  • electricity generation
  • turbine
  • upper chamber
  • lower chamber
  • air flow
  • installation costs
  • maintenance costs
  • energy output
  • ocean waves
  • wave motion
  • deep water installation
  • shore installation
  • budget constraints
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