The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table displays information about a bakery brand’s selling information that contains
number
of transactions, transaction values, number of eat-in and take-away transactions, and Add an article
a number
the number
most
popular item of each three different branches located in Vancouver Correct article usage
the most
Street
in 2015.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that Correct article usage
the Vancourver
Vancourver
Georgia Correct your spelling
Vancouver
Street
branch had the highest average selling value among the other outlets. It produced more than $10.50 from over 850 orders with Chicken Burger as the customer’s favourite menu. Unlike Vancourver
Georgia Street’s
, as the second biggest profit producer, Change noun form
Street
Vancourver
Drake Street
branch only had 390 transactions and became the least popular among the other shops. Moreover
, Chicken Pasta was frequently chosen by customers here . Nevertheless
, despite of
a Change preposition
apply
big
number of Correct word choice
large
purchase
about 750 orders, Fix the agreement mistake
purchases
Correct article usage
the Vancourver
Vancourver
Dunsmuir Correct your spelling
Vancouver
Street
branch only generated a
slightly over $5.50 Correct article usage
apply
of
Change preposition
apply
transaction
value. Add an article
the transaction
Additionally
, it is Chicken Wings that played the
important role Correct article usage
an
for
its profit.Change preposition
in
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