The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
the bar chart illustrates the released four types of film and their ticket sold out in the cinema between 1996 and 2006.
overall
, more
drama
films
were shown than any other category.
however
, comedy is most film's audience’s favourite.Meanwhile, romance is the least popular film at the cinema. particularly,
drama
films
took the lead as approximately 27% were released in 1996.
this
was followed by comedy at 20%,
fantasy
more than 10% and romance at 6 % being released in that year. But in 2006 , the proportion of
drama
, fun, and
fantasy
increased,
however
, romanticism maintained the same position, neither increasing nor decreasing. With respect to sales, in 1996 when ticket sales the number of comedies was the most prevalent with 20%.In the same year,
drama
films
ranked
second,
with approximately 16% of tickets sold. Romantic
films
witnessed a sale of 5%,
whereas
fantasy
movies were the least popular, with about 3% of tickets being consumed. After four years,
drama
, comedy, and
fantasy
grew in popularity, with ticket sales picking up in all three genres;
nevertheless
, the sort of romance underwent a sharp drop to about 2%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words drama, films, fantasy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
  • distributors
  • audiences
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