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Today's young generation is facing many problems in school and at home. What are the problems? What can parents do to help their teenage children?

#generation #school #home #parents #children
Nowadays, humongous teenagers have
a
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plenty of
problems
 both in school and at home. The causes of the
problems
 are too many learning materials and
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some unproductive lifestyles. To handle the issues
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parents
 have to give motivation for their
children
 and understand
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them. In
this
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 we will discuss related to that. On the one hand,
young
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 generation
get
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 issues because they have to focus on numerous lessons in
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school.
Moreover
, the lessons are difficult to understand, so that they are frustrated and give up to learn.
For instance
, the student can not finish their homework.
As a result
, their teacher will be mad
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 them.
In addition
, they do some unproductive activities at home.
Furthermore
, they tend to spend too much
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 for open their gadget to do some internet activities,
such
 as playing games and scrolling social media. So that’s why they do not have adequate time to study.
On the other hand
, the solution of the student
problems
 must be managed by their
parents
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 some ways.
Firstly
, the
parents
 give motivation again and again to maintain
productivity
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 of their
children
,
such
 as
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 advice smoothly to the kids.
Secondly
,
parents
 should
be understanding
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 what the
children
 want,
then
 they have to listen carefully
about
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 the
problems
.
For example
, after
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 the class, ask the
children
with
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a
couple
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 questions like, what
you
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 feeling, do you enjoy
in
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a
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class, tell
to
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mama or papa what the
difficult
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 facing
to
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you
.
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which
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children
 answer the question and
know
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 how to solve their
problems
.
To sum up
, as we know in
this
 era younger people find
a
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plenty of
problems
 between in school and at home because they have a lot of lessons that they do not understand. In order to help the students,
parents
 have to
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motivation
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 and
being
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 close
with
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 them.
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language
Try to use more academic language and avoid informal expressions such as 'humongous.'
coherence
Ensure you clearly divide your essay into paragraphs with clear main points. This will help improve the logical structure.
task response
While discussing solutions, give more specific and feasible examples.
task response
You have properly addressed the topic by discussing both the problems teenagers face and the solutions parents can offer.
coherence
You made a good effort to structure your introduction and conclusion, which provides a nice framework for your essay.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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