Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Sir,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I am writing this
letter to respond you
back that I'm willing to go on a Change preposition
to you
trip
organised by your school for children, and I also
want to thank you for inviting parents for this
trip
.
Actually, I've always wanted to go to Disney world
but never made a Capitalize word
World
trip
even though I've visitied
Florida a number of times. Correct your spelling
visited
Last
year, we went to Florida but, unfortunately, due to
some constrcution
work going on the way Correct your spelling
construction
of
Disney Change preposition
apply
world
Capitalize word
World
resrticted
our Correct your spelling
restricted
trip
. Plus, next year, I'm going to attend some business meetings in this
city, therefore
, making visit
to Add an article
a visit
this
place in advance can make me more fimiliar
with the main roads and streets.
Paying a visit Correct your spelling
familiar
along with
children can really provide them accompany of a responsible person who can take care their
all needs whether it is related to eating Change preposition
of their
home made
food which may they miss during the absence of parents or any medical support. Not only Correct your spelling
homemade
this
, as I've visited this
place a number of times, therefore
, your school would not need to hire any tour guide for some places.
I would really appreciate your assistance in providing details of accomodations, transportations
, and Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
also
when we are going to start this
trip
. Plus, also
tell me the place form
where you will pick all the parents and Correct your spelling
from
childrens
, your support would be valuable.
I look forward Correct your spelling
children
for
your prompt response, and happy to see you.
Yours Regards,
Amanjot Change preposition
to
kaur
.Change the capitalization
Kaur
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suitable writing tone
Ensure consistent use of formal language and correct any informal phrases or inaccuracies.
single idea per paragraph
Consolidate related points into single paragraphs for better flow and coherence.
complete response
Double-check for grammar and spelling errors to enhance clarity and professionalism.
greeting and closing
Good greeting and closing, which adds a personal touch and maintains formality.
complete response
You have provided a complete response by addressing all parts of the task: your desire to go, how you can help, and questions about the trip.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite