Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go on the trip Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask other questions about the trip
Dear teacher
I hope
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letter finds you well. I have realized that you are planning a trip for our children. I got excited when I heard that you are trying to find volunteer parents to coming
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activities and decided to company if it is possible.
Actually, I am an outgoing person and can get along with
others very well. Also
, I am able to make friends very soon and I think I am good at teamwork. In addition
, I am strongly decisive and have reasonable reactions in dangerous situations.
As you know, I am a nurse; So I would be very helpful with medical issues. Also
, I am an excellent chef and I can cook impeccable foods very quickly with few ingredients. In addition
, that city is my birthplace. So I can be a capable tour leader.
I wanted to know what kind of documentary we should bring with us. Unfortunately, our passports were stolen and we do not have them yet. Also
, please tell is it possible to bring my little cousin with me? I will pay extra money for him.He is about seven years old. His parent will sign a consent letter which you design.
I wish you had a great time in that city. You will enjoy the forest and sea both. I highly recommend tasting local cuisine. The food is very delicious. It would be my pleasure If you accepted me to accompany with.
Best regards
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coherence cohesion
Ensure all sentences are complete and clear to improve coherence further.
task achievement
Consider proofreading for minor errors to enhance clarity and accuracy.
task achievement
The letter covers all parts of the task effectively, including the reasons for wanting to go, how you can help, and additional questions about the trip.
task achievement
The writing tone is polite and suitable for a formal letter.
coherence cohesion
Good use of paragraphs to separate different ideas, making the letter well-organized.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately used, enhancing the formal tone of the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite