The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fueld in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fueld in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph shows Three main types of production
standard
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standards

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of
fueld
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fuel

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in
United
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the United

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Kingdom. It records data from 1981 to 2000. In each
those
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of those

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years, petroleum received the highest number of making levels.
However
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, in the whole period
their
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there

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is a gap between petroleum, coal and natural gas. In 1981, coal was 80
then
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dropped
in
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at

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end
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the end

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of 1983 after that it started to
fluctuated
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fluctuate

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until 2000 ended with about 38.
Nevertheless
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, natural gas is starting
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approximately

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apprximately
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approximately

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38
it
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It

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was
graw
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grew steadily

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steadly
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steadily

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from 1981 to 1991
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then started
thenstarted
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and started

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to increase to
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became
become
becam
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become

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