The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
The following diagram illustrates how the hydroelectric
power
Use synonyms
station
converted Use synonyms
water
into Use synonyms
an
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apply
electricity
for public usage.
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Overall
, it can be clearly observed that the Linking Words
electricity
is generated by the means of Use synonyms
water
turbulence and the swirling of turbines from the Use synonyms
water
Use synonyms
in
higher and lower Change preposition
at
altitude
which Fix the agreement mistake
altitudes
runing
back and forth both during day and night in order to create a Correct your spelling
running
constistent
current of energy.
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consistent
To begin
with, the dam located Linking Words
in
a higher level Change preposition
on
is acted
as a gate Wrong verb form
acts
inwhich
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that
control
the flow of the Correct subject-verb agreement
controls
water
to the Use synonyms
station
. During the day, the dam Use synonyms
let
the Correct subject-verb agreement
lets
water
run toward Use synonyms
to
the Change preposition
apply
power
Use synonyms
station
at the bottom level where there is a reversible Use synonyms
turbines
inside the plants. The flow of the Change the noun form
turbine
water
that Use synonyms
past
through the turbine to Correct your spelling
passes
low
reservoir Correct article usage
the low
create
a physical force that the generator inside the Correct subject-verb agreement
creates
station
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converted
it into Wrong verb form
converts
an
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apply
electricity
and Use synonyms
sending
it to Wrong verb form
sends
national
grid through the Add an article
the national
power
line. Use synonyms
While
at night, the Linking Words
water
now Use synonyms
pumping
back to where it Wrong verb form
pumps
begin
from the lower Change the verb form
begins
resovoir
passing through the turbine once again. Correct your spelling
reservoir
This
means that the Linking Words
electricity
can be Use synonyms
generate
all day making Wrong verb form
generated
this
hydroelectric Linking Words
power
a Use synonyms
high efficiency
an alternative natural Add a hyphen
high-efficiency
resources
.Fix the agreement mistake
resource
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