Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have a competitive environment at both school and work or

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cooperation among individuals

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I will give my own perspective. On the one hand, some people believe that it is a good idea to compete

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other. There are several proper reasons for

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but it is mostly agreed that competition brings about high motivation to have a better result in academic achievement or

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. It is possible to say that if we try hard to contend

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, we will desire to win them, so the ambitious sense leads to

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motivation.

As well as

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, when you are in

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state, you will have a purpose to achieve the goal. To illustrate, in a running race, the

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first place, so they have to compete

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other to become the winner.

On the other hand

, it is possible to make the opposing case which is better to cooperate rather than

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. People often have

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, it helps people to overcome challenges more easily than being unaccompanied.

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, it is more productive to entail a group of participants

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a difficult task because the more individuals join

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, the more creative result you carry out. In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. Having said that, from my perspective, I think competing either at school or at work is justified.

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because making a living to cover

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encourages us to fight for a better place in society.