The pie chart shows the amount of money that a children’s charity located in the USA spent and received in one year, 2016
The graph
demonstrated
how much money Verb problem
shows
spent
and received Add a missing verb
was spent
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by children’s
children’s
in the USA within a year. The information on the chart the highest Change noun form
children
revenue
Use synonyms
come
from donated food but the most expense to Correct subject-verb agreement
comes
program
services for children’s Use synonyms
charity
.
The donated food Fix the agreement mistake
charities
top
the list for Fix the agreement mistake
tops
revenue
with 86.6 percent. The investment income and government grant have similar Use synonyms
percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
also
the lowest Linking Words
percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
revenue
sources. The other income Use synonyms
closely
followed by Government grants. The community contributions Add a missing verb
is closely
leads
the way among the other Change the verb form
lead
revenue
sources except donated food. The average Use synonyms
figures
is the Fix the agreement mistake
figure
program
Use synonyms
revenue
for income. Another major factor the Management Use synonyms
program
services is superior points for each category in expenditures. The fundraising Use synonyms
show
average figures between Change the verb form
shows
Program
services and management. The Management and General the lowest Use synonyms
point
for each category in expenditures.Fix the agreement mistake
points
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