The diagram below shows the number of landline telephones per 1000 people in different countries over a five-year period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below

The provided

graph

indicates the

number

of landline

telephones

used by a thousand people in a period of five

years

in a variety of areas.

Firstly

, will be presented the chart structure; the horizontal line of the

graph

displayed countries, which took part in the research, by year. The

number

of

phones

per thousand people is illustrated by the vertical part. The

number

of

phones

doesn't exceed 500 hundred for 1000 people.

In the

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graph

shown

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the results for 2000, 2002, and 2004

years

, which can be easily found by

appropriate

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color

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.

Hence

, following the

graph

notes, the

color

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defined for 2000 is blue, for 2002 is orange, and for 2004 is

gray

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.

Secondly

, the report will include the information obtained from the

graph

. The

graph

shows research results in 9 states, of which 2 have unproportional large

usage

of

this

type of communication for all

years

in the

graph

, the other 2 use

phones

sparingly, and

remaining

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make up the average. Three of the regions

have

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not

used

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telephones

in 2004,

while

do use

in

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them in

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the previous

years

.

Additionally

, the difference inside the same country in the depicted

years

,

mostly

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minor, excluding only Thailand.

For instance

, in Singapore, the count of

phones

in 2000 , which is the highest of 3, and

2004

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in 2004

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, the smallest one, is less than a hundred landline

telephones

per 1000 of

population

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the population

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.

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behavior

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appears in Myanmar, the territory with the smallest

telephones

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count in the

graph

.

According to

the picture, the largest

usage

of

telephones

can be emphasized in 2 countries: Brunei Darussalam and Singapore. There, the

usage

is greater than 150 points. In conclusion, the telephone

usage

in each of the mentioned countries does not vary much for those with a large

number

of

phones

per 1000 and

other

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others

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with

the

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less.