The line graph shows the percentage of spending in a European country from 1960 to 2000.
The line graph illustrates what proportion of spending was allocated to categories of goods and services in a European country between 1960 and 2000.
Overall
, Linking Words
although
the expenditure on food and leisure Linking Words
initially
ranked first for almost the entire Linking Words
period
, they were overtaken by Use synonyms
transport
spending over the Use synonyms
last
years. Linking Words
In contrast
, the figure for energy remained the least significant throughout the Linking Words
period
.
In the first year, the expenditure on food was about 33%, after which it experienced a slight drop of 3 Use synonyms
percent
before decreasing significantly to about 14 % Change the spelling
per cent
at the end
of the Linking Words
period
. The proportion of spending on leisure was Use synonyms
initially
20%, which was followed by a dramatic fall to about 14% in 2000, though it was overstripped by Linking Words
transport
in 1990.
The figure for Use synonyms
transport
was Use synonyms
initially
almost as high as that for Linking Words
transport
(around 10 %). Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
while
the former increased gradually as it reached approximately 15 Linking Words
percent
in the Change the spelling
per cent
last
year, the latter saw a considerable decline, as it hit Linking Words
initial
figure for energy in 2000.
The share of expenditure on energy stood Correct article usage
the initial
last
throughout the Linking Words
period
, as it had decreased to a little above 1% by 2000.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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